Recapping from the last post, here’s a paragraph that would probably get a quick rejection from an agent… A bright red 2005 Honda Civic sped down the one straightaway on a long, winding mountain road, going thirty miles per hour over the posted speed limit. Inside the Honda, four college students jammed out to the …
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When Good Writing Isn’t Good Enough
As promised in the last post, I’m going to show actual writing examples that range from good to – hopefully – magnificent. Let’s start with the paragraph below… The car sped down the road. The college students inside the car hung their arms and legs out the open windows and shook them up and down …